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A2. What is the inciting incident and how many words in does it land? Both

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Treasure IslandThriller and adventureBilly Bones arrives at the Admiral Benbow inn in Chapter 1, bringing mystery and danger into Jim's ordinary life. This lands at approximately 2,000 words into the 68,669-word book.
The Thirty-Nine StepsThriller and adventureScudder warns Hannay of the Karolides assassination plot on June 15th in Chapter 1, around 4,000 words in. This establishes the central conspiracy and Hannay's obligation to act.
The Prisoner of ZendaThriller and adventureThe inciting incident is Rudolf meeting the King in the forest and discovering their striking resemblance in Chapter 3. It lands at approximately 8,000 words into the 54,078-word book.
Around the World in Eighty DaysThriller and adventureThe inciting incident is Fogg's wager at the Reform Club in Chapter 3, where he stakes twenty thousand pounds to travel around the world in eighty days. It lands at approximately 9,474 words into the 63,208-word book.
King Solomon's MinesThriller and adventureSir Henry Curtis asks Quatermain to join an expedition seeking his missing brother and Solomon's Mines in Chapter 1. The inciting incident lands at approximately 2,000 words into the 81,974-word book.
The Hound of the BaskervillesCrime and mysteryDr. Mortimer arrives at Baker Street with the Baskerville curse manuscript in Chapter 1. The inciting incident lands at approximately 2,000 words into the 59,487-word book.
A Study in ScarletCrime and mysteryThe inciting incident is Holmes and Watson called to investigate Drebber's death at Lauriston Gardens in Chapter 3. It lands at approximately 10,000 words into the 43,595-word book.
The Adventures of Sherlock HolmesCrime and mysteryThe King of Bohemia engages Holmes to recover a compromising photograph from Irene Adler in Chapter 1. The inciting incident occurs around word 4,000 to 5,000 of the 105,143-word book.
The MoonstoneCrime and mysteryThe inciting incident is the discovery that the Moonstone has been stolen from Rachel's cabinet the morning after her birthday party, in Chapter 15. It lands at approximately 47,500 words into the 190,014-word novel, …
The Woman in WhiteCrime and mysteryThe inciting incident is Walter meeting the woman in white on Hampstead Heath in chapter 3, where she reveals she escaped an asylum and fears a baronet. It lands at approximately 12,000 words into the 247,843-word …
Pride and PrejudiceRomanceThe inciting incident is Darcy's insult at the assembly ball in Chapter 3, where he calls Elizabeth merely tolerable. This lands approximately 7,500 words into the 122,720-word novel.
PersuasionRomanceThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 3 when Admiral Croft is chosen as tenant for Kellynch Hall and Anne learns his sister is connected to a Mr Wentworth, stirring her anxiety about her former love. It lands at …
EmmaRomanceThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when Emma declares her intention to find a wife for Mr. Elton, setting her matchmaking schemes in motion. It lands approximately 2,000 words into the 160,886-word novel.
Jane EyreRomanceThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when John Reed attacks Jane and she fights back violently, leading to her being locked in the red-room. This lands at approximately 4,000 words into the 187,566-word novel, …
DraculaGothic and horrorThe inciting incident is Jonathan Harker's journey to Transylvania to meet Count Dracula, beginning Chapter 1. It lands at approximately 4,000 words into the 161,966-word book, or about 2.5% through.
FrankensteinGothic and horrorThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 8 when Victor discovers the secret of life and begins creating a human being. It lands at approximately 37,500 words, roughly halfway through the 75,165-word novel.
Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr HydeGothic and horrorThe inciting incident is Enfield's story of Hyde trampling a child and producing a cheque signed by Jekyll, told in Chapter 1. It lands at approximately 3,000 words into the 25,685-word book.
The Picture of Dorian GrayGothic and horrorThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 2 when Dorian sees his finished portrait and wishes it would age instead of him, setting the supernatural curse in motion. This lands at approximately 15,800 words into the …
Wuthering HeightsGothic and horrorThe inciting incident is Lockwood's first visit to Wuthering Heights in Chapter 1, where Heathcliff's hostility and the mysterious household intrigue him. It lands at word 1 of the narrative.
The Turn of the ScrewGothic and horrorThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 4 when the governess sees a mysterious man on the tower. This lands at approximately 10,000 words into the 39,992-word book.
The Time MachineScience fictionThe inciting incident is in Chapter 2 when the Time Traveller demonstrates the working model machine vanishing before his guests' eyes, proving his theory. It lands at approximately 3,000 words into the book.
The War of the WorldsScience fictionThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 2 when Ogilvy discovers the cylinder is artificial and hollow with something alive inside trying to unscrew the top. This lands at approximately 5,000 words into the …
The Invisible ManScience fictionThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 7 when Griffin removes his bandages and reveals his complete invisibility to the shocked crowd at the inn, forcing him to fight the constable and escape. This lands at …
Alice's Adventures in WonderlandFantasy and children'sThe inciting incident is Alice following the White Rabbit down the hole in Chapter 1. It lands at approximately 500 words into the book.
The Wonderful Wizard of OzFantasy and children'sThe cyclone sweeps Dorothy from Kansas in Chapter 1, landing at word 4,847 (about 12% through the 39,341-word book). This inciting incident separates her from home and forces her into the magical land.
The Secret GardenFantasy and children'sMary is orphaned by cholera in India and left alone in a bungalow until discovered by British officers. This inciting incident lands at approximately 2,000 words into the 81,188-word book.
The Wind in the WillowsFantasy and children'sThe inciting incident is the motor car crash into Mole and Rat's caravan in chapter 2, sparking Toad's obsession. It lands around 5,000 words into the book.
Great ExpectationsLiteraryThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when Pip encounters an escaped convict in the churchyard who threatens him and demands he steal a file and food. This lands at approximately 5,000 words into the 186,445-word …
A Christmas CarolLiteraryMarley's ghost appears at the end of Stave I, around word 5000, warning Scrooge that three spirits will visit him that night to offer redemption.
The Great GatsbyLiteraryThe inciting incident is Nick seeing Gatsby reach toward the green light at the end of Chapter 1. It lands around word 3,000, establishing the mystery that drives the narrative.
Heart of DarknessLiteraryThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when Marlow accepts a job with the Company to travel to Africa and meet the mysterious trader Kurtz. It lands around word 2000, early in the narrative frame.
KidnappedThriller and adventureDavid leaves home with his father's letter in Chapter 1, around 2,000 words in. This sets him on the path to claim his inheritance and meet his uncle.
The Count of Monte CristoThriller and adventureThe inciting incident is Dantès' arrest at his wedding feast in Chapter 5 when soldiers arrive with a warrant. It lands at approximately 58,500 words into the 466,070-word novel, roughly 12.5% through.
The Three MusketeersThriller and adventureD'Artagnan is robbed and insulted by a mysterious gentleman in Meung in Chapter 1, losing his letter of introduction. This lands at approximately 7,000 words into the 229,771-word novel.
The Riddle of the SandsThriller and adventureThe inciting incident is Davies's letter inviting Carruthers to join a Baltic yachting cruise, received in Chapter 1. It lands at approximately 2,000 words into the 109,278-word book.
The Scarlet PimpernelThriller and adventureThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when the Scarlet Pimpernel rescues the Comtesse de Tournay by disguising her in a cart, establishing his heroic mission and Bibot's failure. It lands at approximately 4,000 …
The Lost WorldThriller and adventureGladys rejects Malone and demands he prove himself through great deeds before marrying him. This inciting incident lands at chapter 1, approximately 3,500 words into the 76,506-word book.
Captain BloodThriller and adventurePeter Blood is arrested by dragoons while treating a wounded rebel at Oglethorpe's Farm in Chapter 1. The inciting incident lands at approximately 5,000 words into the 114,000-word novel.
Lady Audley's SecretCrime and mysteryThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 4 when Robert encounters George Talboys and learns his wife has died, prompting Robert to investigate George's mysterious disappearance. It lands at approximately 30,000 words …
The Murders in the Rue MorgueCrime and mysteryThe inciting incident is the newspaper report of the brutal murders in the Rue Morgue in Section 2. It lands at approximately 3,500 words into the 13,885-word text, roughly one quarter through.
The Innocence of Father BrownCrime and mysteryThe inciting incident is Valentin's arrival in London to catch Flambeau, occurring in Chapter 1. It lands at approximately 3,000 words into the 79,546-word book.
The Big Bow MysteryCrime and mysteryThe inciting incident is Mrs. Drabdump discovering Arthur Constant dead in his locked bedroom in Chapter 1. It lands at approximately 4,000 words into the 42,638-word book.
The Leavenworth CaseCrime and mysteryThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 2 when Raymond learns of Mr. Leavenworth's murder and is asked to help his nieces at the inquest. It lands at approximately 3,000 words into the 111,107-word novel.
The Red Thumb MarkCrime and mysteryReuben Hornby arrives with his solicitor in Chapter 2 to ask Thorndyke to defend him against a diamond theft charge, with a thumb-print found in blood as damning evidence. This lands at approximately 14,000 words …
The Amateur CracksmanCrime and mysteryBunny visits Raffles at midnight confessing he has lost two hundred pounds at baccarat and faces ruin. Raffles offers to help through burglary. The inciting incident lands at approximately 1,100 words into the book.
The Secret AgentCrime and mysteryThe inciting incident is Vladimir's demand in Chapter 2 that Verloc orchestrate a bombing of Greenwich Observatory within one month. It lands at approximately 18,250 words into the 91,008-word novel.
Sense and SensibilityRomanceThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when Mr. Dashwood dies and his estate passes to his heir through entailment, leaving the widow and three daughters with only ten thousand pounds and forced to leave Norland. …
North and SouthRomanceThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 4 when Mr. Hale reveals his religious doubts and the family's move to Milton-Northern, upending Margaret's world. It lands at approximately 36,500 words into the 183,455-word …
Far from the Madding CrowdRomanceThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when Gabriel observes Bathsheba admiring herself in a looking glass and diagnoses vanity as her greatest fault. This establishes the central conflict between Gabriel's quiet …
The Enchanted AprilRomanceThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when Mrs. Wilkins sees the San Salvatore advertisement in The Times and impulsively invites Mrs. Arbuthnot to rent it together. It lands at approximately 2,400 words into the …
The SheikRomanceThe inciting incident is Ahmed's abduction of Diana in Chapter 2. It lands at approximately 22,600 words into the 88,318-word book, roughly 26% through.
Daddy Long LegsRomanceThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when an anonymous Trustee offers to fund Jerusha's college education in exchange for monthly letters. It lands at approximately 3,670 words into the 37,670-word book.
CarmillaGothic and horrorThe inciting incident occurs in chapter 2 when a carriage accident brings Carmilla to Laura's castle and her mother departs with cryptic warnings. It lands at approximately 7,400 words into the 27,925-word book.
The Castle of OtrantoGothic and horrorThe giant helmet falls on Conrad during his wedding feast in Chapter 1, killing him instantly. This occurs approximately 2,000 words into the 34,867-word novel, triggering the supernatural chain of events.
The Phantom of the OperaGothic and horrorThe inciting incident is Raoul hearing a man's voice in Christine's dressing room claiming she must love him, in Chapter 2. It lands at approximately 9,900 words into the 83,400-word book.
The Great God PanGothic and horrorThe inciting incident is Dr. Raymond's surgical experiment on Mary in Chapter 1 to pierce the veil between worlds. It lands at approximately 4,400 words into the 21,758-word book.
The Yellow WallpaperGothic and horrorThe inciting incident occurs in Section 1 when the narrator is confined to the nursery room with yellow wallpaper and begins observing its disturbing pattern. It lands around 600 words into the 6173-word story.
The Call of CthulhuGothic and horrorThe inciting incident occurs in Section 1 when the narrator inherits his grand-uncle's locked box containing a clay bas-relief and cryptic notes about Cthulhu. It lands around 2000 words in, early in the section.
The Island of Doctor MoreauScience fictionPrendick survives shipwreck in chapter 1, rescued after eight days adrift. The inciting incident lands at approximately 2,000 words into the 43,679-word novel.
Journey to the Centre of the EarthScience fictionThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when a runic parchment falls from an old Icelandic book, revealing a secret message about a passage to Earth's centre. It lands at approximately 2,150 words into the …
A Princess of MarsScience fictionThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when Carter discovers a mysterious cave in Arizona while pursuing Apache raiders. It lands at approximately 4,000 words into the book, establishing the supernatural mystery …
HerlandScience fictionThe inciting incident is the three men's discovery of legends about a hidden all-female country and their decision to mount a secret expedition in Chapter 1. It lands at approximately 3,000 words into the book.
FlatlandScience fictionThe inciting incident is the Sphere's arrival on the last day of 1999 (chapter 16), when the mysterious visitor enters the Square's home and claims to come from Space. It lands at approximately 19,500 words into the …
ErewhonScience fictionThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when the narrator becomes obsessed with exploring the mysterious mountains beyond the frontier, resolving to attempt crossing after shearing season. It lands at approximately …
The Last ManScience fictionAdrian's arrival in Cumberland in Chapter 2 transforms Lionel's hatred into love and friendship, marking the start of his journey toward belonging. This occurs around word 15,000 of 169,311 total.
Through the Looking GlassFantasy and children'sThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when Alice passes through the looking glass into a reversed world of chess pieces and discovers the Jabberwocky poem. It lands at approximately 2,000 words into the …
A Little PrincessFantasy and children'sThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 7 when Captain Crewe's death and financial ruin are revealed during Sara's birthday party, stripping her of wealth and status. It lands at approximately 26,786 words into the …
The Jungle BookFantasy and children'sFather Wolf rescues Mowgli from Shere Khan in chapter 1, establishing the vendetta that drives the plot. This occurs at the book's start, around word 500.
Five Children and ItFantasy and children'sThe inciting incident is the children's discovery of the Psammead and their first wish to be beautiful in Chapter 1. It lands at approximately 1,300 words into the book.
The Railway ChildrenFantasy and children'sFather is taken away by mysterious gentlemen on government business in Chapter 1, forcing the family to move to a cottage. This occurs at the start of the first paragraph, around word 100.
The Princess and the GoblinFantasy and children'sThe inciting incident is Chapter 6, when Irene and her nurse encounter Curdie and goblins on the mountain after sunset, establishing the real goblin threat. It lands at approximately 12,000 words into the 51,219-word …
Peter and WendyFantasy and children'sPeter breaks into the Darling nursery seeking his shadow in Chapter 1. The inciting incident lands at approximately 3,000 words into the 47,331-word book.
The Worm OuroborosFantasy and children'sThe inciting incident occurs in Section 1 when the ambassador from Witchland arrives at Krothering Castle demanding submission. This lands at approximately 3,000 words into the 170,881-word book, roughly 1.8% through.
Anne of Green GablesFantasy and children'sThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 2 when Matthew brings home a girl instead of a boy from the train station, setting the entire story in motion. This lands at approximately 15,000 words into the 103,002-word …
Black BeautyFantasy and children'sThe inciting incident is Black Beauty's sale to Squire Gordon at Birtwick Park in chapter 4, where he begins his journey through different homes. It lands at approximately 9,500 words into the 59,871-word novel.
MiddlemarchLiteraryThe inciting incident is Dorothea's acceptance of Casaubon's marriage proposal in chapter 5. It lands at approximately 16,000 words into the 320,023-word novel.
Tess of the d'UrbervillesLiteraryPrince the horse is killed by a mail-cart in Chapter 4 when Tess falls asleep at the reins during a night journey. This accident costs the family their livelihood and forces Tess to seek work with the d'Urbervilles, …
Mrs DallowayLiteraryThe inciting incident is Clarissa's morning walk through London buying flowers for her party in Section 1. It lands at the opening and spans roughly 2,000 words, establishing her reflections on past choices and the …
To the LighthouseLiteraryThe inciting incident occurs in chapter 1 when Mrs. Ramsay promises James a trip to the Lighthouse, but Mr. Ramsay crushes his hopes by saying the weather will not be fine. It lands at the opening of the novel, …
Anna KareninaLiteraryThe inciting incident occurs in Chapter 1 when Stepan Oblonsky's wife Dolly discovers his affair with the governess, shattering their marriage. This lands at approximately 4,000 words into the 351,659-word novel, or …
Crime and PunishmentLiteraryRaskolnikov visits the pawnbroker to scout her flat and test his resolve for a secret murder plan in Chapter 1. The inciting incident lands at approximately 4,000 words into the 204,405-word novel.
Madame BovaryLiteraryThe inciting incident is Emma's invitation to the ball at Vaubyessard in Chapter 7, which awakens her desire for a different life. It lands at approximately 41,000 words into the 116,834-word novel.
The Age of InnocenceLiteraryEllen Olenska's shocking appearance at the Opera in Chapter 1 disrupts Newland's orderly world. The inciting incident occurs at word count approximately 2,100, when she enters the Mingott box during the Daisy Song.
Silas MarnerLiteraryThe inciting incident is Dunstan's theft of Silas's gold in Chapter 4. It lands at approximately 28,801 words into the 72,022-word book, or 40% through.
Adventures of Huckleberry FinnLiteraryPap's return in Chapter 5 is the inciting incident. Huck sees his father's tracks in the snow and fears losing his money, forcing him to act. This lands around word 18,000 of 112,677 total.
HamletPlaysThe ghost appears on the castle platform in Scene 1, driving Hamlet toward revenge. It lands at roughly 1,200 words into the 31,738-word play.
MacbethPlaysThe inciting incident is the witches' prophecy in scene 3, hailing Macbeth as future king. It lands at roughly 2000 words into the 17992-word play, about 11% through.
Romeo and JulietPlaysThe inciting incident is Romeo and Juliet meeting at the Capulet feast in chapter 6, where Romeo falls in love with Juliet and learns she is a Montague. It lands at approximately 6,100 words into the 25,710-word play.
OthelloPlaysThe inciting incident occurs in Scene 1 when Iago and Roderigo reveal Othello and Desdemona's secret marriage to Brabantio, spurring him to action. It lands at approximately 450 words into the play.
A Midsummer Night's DreamPlaysHermia defies her father and plans to flee with Lysander to the wood in Scene 1, occurring around word 1200 of 17150 words. This sets the lovers' journey in motion.
Twelfth NightPlaysViola survives shipwreck and decides to disguise herself as a boy to serve Orsino in Scene 2. This lands at roughly 3,000 words into the 21,125-word play.
Doctor FaustusPlaysThe inciting incident is Faustus's pact with Lucifer, already in effect as the play opens in Section 1. It lands at the start, around word 1 of the 12,468 total.
The Importance of Being EarnestPlaysJack proposes to Gwendolen in Act I, then faces Lady Bracknell's interrogation about his origins. The inciting incident lands around word 4,152 (roughly 20% into the 20,591-word play).
A Doll's HousePlaysKrogstad threatens to expose Nora's forged bond in Act I, around word 4000. This forces the plot toward revelation and drives all subsequent action.
Hedda GablerPlaysThe inciting incident is Hedda's mention of her pistols and revelation of her boredom with marriage in Act First. It lands around word 3000, establishing her discontent and desire for power.
PygmalionPlaysHiggins meets Eliza in Covent Garden and reveals he can transform her through phonetics, landing at Act I when he says he could pass her off as a duchess at an ambassador's garden party.
The School for ScandalPlaysThe inciting incident occurs in Scene 1 when Lady Sneerwell and Joseph Surface plot to ruin Charles while advancing Joseph's suit with Maria. It lands at approximately 4,000 words into the 28,583-word play.
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