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The Wind in the Willows: Prose style
17 lenses on prose style for The Wind in the Willows by Kenneth Grahame. Count lenses are exact for our text. AI lenses are our reading and cite only quotes that passed a word for word check.
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H1. Readability score per chapter. Count
Flesch reading ease for the whole book is about 71 (higher is easier; 60 to 70 is plain English).
Reading ease per chapter, chapter by chapter
H2. Vocabulary range. Count
6,557 different words. On average 53 in every 100 words are new within a 500 word stretch. 3,284 words appear only once.
H3. Signature words: what this author uses far more than others. Count
toad, mole, animals, animal, badger. See the full lens on the book page.
H4. Adverb and adjective rates. Count
About 19.63 words ending in 'ly' and 7.89 likely adjectives per 1,000 words. (rough estimate from word lists)
'ly' words per 1,000, chapter by chapter
H5. Share of weak verbs such as "was" and "had". Count
'Was', 'were', 'had', 'is' and 'are' make up 2.4% of all words.
H6. Passive voice rate. Count
About 4.5% of sentences use a passive form such as 'was taken'. (rough estimate from word lists)
H7. Variety of sentence openings. Count
The five most common first words start 27% of sentences: the, he, i, and, but.
| First word | Sentences |
|---|---|
| the | 286 |
| he | 152 |
| i | 134 |
| and | 118 |
| but | 102 |
| it | 78 |
| o | 75 |
| toad | 74 |
| you | 71 |
| then | 70 |
H8. Rhythm: how much sentence length varies. Count
Sentence length varies by 0.85 of its mean on average (higher means a more varied rhythm).
Variation per chapter, chapter by chapter
H9. Similes and metaphors: how many, and of what kind. Both
80 likely similes ('like a', 'as ... as'): 1.34 per 1,000 words. (rough estimate from word lists)
Ch 1, para 3: “This is fine!” he said to himself. “This is better than whitewashing!” The sunshine struck hot on his fur, soft breezes caressed his heated brow, and after the …
Ch 1, para 7: As he sat on the grass and looked across the river, a dark hole in the bank opposite, just above the water’s edge, caught his eye, and dreamily …
Ch 1, para 7: As he sat on the grass and looked across the river, a dark hole in the bank opposite, just above the water’s edge, caught his eye, and dreamily …
Ch 1, para 33: The Mole never heard a word he was saying. Absorbed in the new life he was entering upon, intoxicated with the sparkle, the ripple, the scents and the …
Ch 1, para 34: “I like your clothes awfully, old chap,” he remarked after some half an hour or so had passed. “I’m going to get a black velvet smoking-suit myself some …
Ch 1, para 49: “And beyond the Wild Wood again?” he asked: “Where it’s all blue and dim, and one sees what may be hills or perhaps they mayn’t, and something like …
Rich similes and metaphors throughout, mostly comparing animals to human qualities and natural forces to emotions. Water as freedom, home as sanctuary, motor cars as obsession, and the Wild Wood as danger are central metaphorical threads.
Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 2, Ch 5, Ch 7, Ch 9
The Mole was bewitched, entranced, fascinated. By the side of the river he trotted as one trots, when very small, by the side of a man who holds one spell-bound by exciting stories (Ch 1, para 6)
There’s real life for you, embodied in that little cart. The open road, the dusty highway, the heath, the common, the hedgerows, the rolling downs! (Ch 2, para 29)
the magnificent motor-car, immense, breath-snatching, passionate, with its pilot tense and hugging his wheel, possessed all earth and air for the fraction of a second (Ch 2, para 48)
H10. Senses used: sight, sound, smell, touch, taste. Both
Share of sense words. sight 52%, sound 24%, touch 20%, taste 2%, smell 2%. (rough estimate from word lists)
| Sense | Words |
|---|---|
| sight | 423 |
| sound | 195 |
| touch | 165 |
| taste | 19 |
| smell | 18 |
All five senses used extensively. Sight dominates (river scenes, Toad Hall), sound is crucial (piping in chapter 7, motor car roar), smell triggers Mole's homesickness in chapter 5, touch in water and cold, taste minimal but present in feasts.
Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 5, Ch 7, Ch 8, Ch 12
The Mole was bewitched, entranced, fascinated. By the side of the river he trotted as one trots, when very small, by the side of a man who holds one spell-bound by exciting stories (Ch 1, para 6)
Home! That was what they meant, those caressing appeals, those soft touches wafted through the air (Ch 5, para 9)
O Mole! the beauty of it! The merry bubble and joy, the thin, clear, happy call of the distant piping! (Ch 7, para 19)
H11. Repetition, lists of three and other patterns. Both
128 lists of three in the pattern 'a, b and c': 2.15 per 1,000 words. (rough estimate from word lists)
Lists of three appear frequently: the four friends as a unit, three stages of Toad's journey (escape, wandering, return), repeated patterns of temptation and resistance. Rhythmic sentences with parallel structure reinforce themes.
Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 6, Ch 10, Ch 11, Ch 12
There’s real life for you, embodied in that little cart. The open road, the dusty highway, the heath, the common, the hedgerows, the rolling downs! (Ch 2, para 29)
The mighty Badger, his whiskers bristling, his great cudgel whistling through the air; Mole, black and grim, brandishing his stick and shouting his awful war-cry, “A Mole! A Mole! (Ch 12, para 23)
H12. Old words that may trip modern readers. Count
Old forms that may trip a modern reader: ere, thither, hither, whence, thee, thy.
| Word | Times |
|---|---|
| ere | 5 |
| thither | 3 |
| hither | 2 |
| whence | 2 |
| thee | 2 |
| thy | 2 |
| anon | 1 |
H13. Showing against telling, with examples. AI
Author shows character through action and dialogue rather than stating traits. Toad's obsession revealed through his behaviour with motor cars, not description. Mole's growth shown through his choices in chapters 1, 5, and 11.
Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 2, Ch 5, Ch 6, Ch 10
I’ve discovered the real thing, the only genuine occupation for a life time (Ch 2, para 27)
he was only conscious that he was Toad once more, Toad at his best and highest, Toad the terror (Ch 6, para 76)
Ho, ho! I am The Toad, the handsome, the popular, the successful Toad! (Ch 10, para 55)
H14. How much description comes before action. Both
Description is woven into action rather than preceding it. The river is described as Mole experiences it in chapter 1, Badger's home revealed as they enter in chapter 4. Setting emerges through movement and discovery.
Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 3, Ch 4, Ch 7
The Mole was bewitched, entranced, fascinated. By the side of the river he trotted as one trots, when very small, by the side of a man who holds one spell-bound by exciting stories (Ch 1, para 6)
It seemed a place where heroes could fitly feast after victory, where weary harvesters could line up in scores along the table and keep their Harvest Home with mirth and song (Ch 4, para 10)
H15. Filter words such as "saw", "felt", "heard". Count
Filter words ('saw', 'felt', 'heard' and so on): 5.24 per 1,000 words.
| Word | Times |
|---|---|
| seemed | 71 |
| saw | 58 |
| heard | 56 |
| thought | 51 |
| knew | 37 |
| felt | 21 |
| noticed | 8 |
| watched | 6 |
| wondered | 3 |
| realised | 1 |
H16. Shifts in tone. AI
Tone shifts from cosy domesticity in chapters 1 and 4, to adventure and danger in chapters 2 and 3, to transcendent mystery in chapter 7, to comic desperation in chapters 8 and 10, to heroic action in chapter 12.
Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 2, Ch 3, Ch 7, Ch 8, Ch 12
Believe me, my young friend, there is nothing—absolute nothing—half so much worth doing as simply messing about in boats (Ch 1, para 22)
O Mole! the beauty of it! The merry bubble and joy, the thin, clear, happy call of the distant piping! (Ch 7, para 19)
Ho, ho! I am The Toad, the handsome, the popular, the successful Toad! (Ch 10, para 55)
H17. How the comedy works. AI
Comedy works through Toad's repeated failures and vanity, his inability to resist temptation despite consequences. Humour also comes from animal characters behaving like humans, and from the gap between Toad's self-image and reality.
Chapters: Ch 2, Ch 6, Ch 8, Ch 10
he was only conscious that he was Toad once more, Toad at his best and highest, Toad the terror (Ch 6, para 76)
Ho, ho! I am The Toad, the handsome, the popular, the successful Toad! (Ch 10, para 55)
Where’s the amusement in that? Where does the fun come in? And all because you must needs go and steal a motor-car. (Ch 11, para 7)
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