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Anatomy of The Secret Garden

Frances Hodgson Burnett, 1911. Public domain in the UK and the US. Setting mirrors growth; an unlikeable lead who changes.

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81,188 words
27 chapters
38% dialogue
13.7 words a sentence
third person
5.4 hours to read

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Beat positions Both

Story and structure · lens A1 · compare across books

BeatWhereOur reading
Inciting incidentCh 1 (CHAPTER I), about 1% throughMary is orphaned by cholera in India and left alone, setting her on the path to England.
First turning pointCh 4 (CHAPTER IV), about 11% throughMary learns of the locked garden and becomes obsessed with finding it.
MidpointCh 13 (CHAPTER XIII), about 43% throughMary discovers Colin and reveals the secret garden to him, uniting the two isolated children.
Low pointCh 17 (CHAPTER XVII), about 59% throughColin has a severe hysterical tantrum, but Mary shocks him into accepting life and the garden's promise.
ClimaxCh 27 (CHAPTER XXVII), about 97% throughArchibald Craven returns home to find Colin transformed and healthy, reuniting father and son in the garden.
ResolutionCh 27 (CHAPTER XXVII), about 97% throughColin walks across the lawn with his father, strong and healed, as the garden's transformative power is fully realised.
The cholera had broken out in its most fatal form and people were dying like flies. (Ch 1, para 16)
There’s twelve of us an’ my father only gets sixteen shilling a week. I can tell you my mother’s put to it to get porridge for ’em all. (Ch 4, para 51)
Because when you were born the garden door was locked and the key was buried. And it has been locked for ten years. (Ch 13, para 73)
There’s not a lump as big as a pin! If you ever say there is again, I shall laugh! (Ch 17, para 33)

Percent is the middle of that chapter as a share of all words. The beat labels are our AI reading of the chapter notes.

Chapter length chart Count

Pace · lens D1 · compare across books

27 chapters. Median 2,713 words, shortest 1,473, longest 5,335. Whole book 81,188 words, about 5.4 hours at 250 words a minute.

Each bar is one chapter in reading order. Hover for the title and count.

Dialogue share per chapter Count

Dialogue and voice · lens C1 · compare across books

38% of all words are dialogue. Speech tags: "said" is 66% of tag verbs we found.

Cast and presence map Count

Character · lens B1, B2 · compare across books

CharacterRole (our reading)Share of mentionsChapters on pageFirst appears
Mary Lennoxlead35%27 of 27Ch 1, para 2
Colin Cravenlove interest17%16 of 27Ch 4, para 15
Dickon Sowerbyally16%25 of 27Ch 2, para 12
Marthaally10%18 of 27Ch 4, para 4
Ben Weatherstaffmentor7%19 of 27Ch 4, para 131
Mrs. Medlockfoil7%21 of 27Ch 2, para 20
Mr. Archibald Cravenantagonist3%13 of 27Ch 2, para 12
Dr. Cravenminor2%6 of 27Ch 14, para 93
Mrs. Sowerbymentor2%8 of 27Ch 6, para 19
Mrs. Cravenminor0%6 of 27Ch 5, para 34
Mr. Pitcherminor0%5 of 27Ch 2, para 53

Who is on the page, chapter by chapter

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Mary Lennox
Colin Craven
Dickon Sowerby
Martha
Ben Weatherstaff
Mrs. Medlock
Mr. Archibald Craven
Dr. Craven
Mrs. Sowerby
Mrs. Craven

Most shared chapters: Dickon Sowerby and Mary Lennox (25), Mary Lennox and Mrs. Medlock (21), Dickon Sowerby and Mrs. Medlock (20), Ben Weatherstaff and Mary Lennox (19), Ben Weatherstaff and Dickon Sowerby (19).

Counts use the names and aliases in our cast list. A name in narration or speech counts as a mention.

Chapter ending hooks AI

Pace · lens D8 · compare across books

Chapter endings: 11 reveal, 10 quiet, 3 cliffhanger, 3 question.

Chapters end with questions, revelations, or quiet moments of connection that draw readers forward. Early chapters use mystery and discovery to hook interest, while later chapters use emotional turning points and physical transformations to maintain tension.

Every chapter ending
  1. Ch 1: reveal. The final lines reveal Mary's complete isolation: 'It was true that there was no one in the bungalow but herself and the little rustling snake.'
    It was true that there was no one in the bungalow but herself and the little rustling snake. (Ch 1, para 31)
  2. Ch 2: quiet. Mary arrives at the manor and is left alone in her room, establishing her new isolated life
    And she turned her face toward the streaming panes of the window of the railway carriage and gazed out at the gray rain-storm which looked as if it would go on forever and ever. (Ch 2, para 57)
  3. Ch 3: quiet. Mary is left in her room, establishing her isolation at the manor
    It was in this way Mistress Mary arrived at Misselthwaite Manor and she had perhaps never felt quite so contrary in all her life. (Ch 3, para 35)
  4. Ch 4: cliffhanger. Ben Weatherstaff refuses to tell Mary about the locked garden and walks away, leaving her curious and frustrated
  5. Ch 5: question. Martha insists the crying was the wind, but Mary knows she is lying, leaving the mystery unresolved
    But something troubled and awkward in her manner made Mistress Mary stare very hard at her. She did not believe she was speaking the truth. (Ch 5, para 46)
  6. Ch 6: cliffhanger. Mary declares 'There was someone crying, there was, there was!' showing her determination to uncover the mystery
    There was someone crying—there was—there was!” she said to herself. (Ch 6, para 43)
  7. Ch 7: reveal. Mary finds the key and whispers 'Perhaps it is the key to the garden!' suggesting the mystery is about to be solved
  8. Ch 8: reveal. Mary discovers the door and enters the secret garden, standing inside with excitement and wonder
    She was standing inside the secret garden. (Ch 8, para 55)
  9. Ch 9: question. Mary hears mysterious crying in the house again and wonders what it is, but Martha avoids answering
  10. Ch 10: reveal. Dickon leaves a picture of a missel thrush nest with a message promising to return, reassuring Mary of his loyalty
    I will cum bak. (Ch 12, para 104)
  11. Ch 11: quiet. Mary leaves reluctantly, trusting Dickon completely, and he reassures her with the missel thrush metaphor
  12. Ch 12: cliffhanger. Mary returns to the garden to find Dickon gone and only a note promising his return, leaving her wondering if he was real
    I will cum bak. (Ch 12, para 104)
  13. Ch 13: quiet. Mary sings Colin to sleep, establishing a bond and promising to visit him regularly
  14. Ch 14: quiet. Colin asks Mary to tell him about Rajahs as the chapter closes, establishing their new routine
    Tell me about Rajahs. (Ch 14, para 127)
  15. Ch 15: quiet. Mary and Dickon settle to watch the robin, establishing their protective guardianship of the garden
    Mary knew that when he flew away with his twig to his own corner of the garden the darkness of his dew-bright eye meant that he would not tell their secret for the world. (Ch 15, para 92)
  16. Ch 16: question. Mary hesitates at her door, deciding whether to return to Colin despite her anger
    Perhaps he’ll try to throw his pillow at me again, but—I think—I’ll go. (Ch 16, para 68)
  17. Ch 17: reveal. Colin falls asleep as Mary describes the secret garden, suggesting hope and transformation
  18. Ch 18: reveal. Mary finally reveals the garden's existence to Colin, transforming his despair into hope
  19. Ch 19: quiet. Mary and Dickon affirm Colin must see the garden without losing time, setting the stage for his visit
  20. Ch 20: reveal. Colin's transformation is revealed as he sees the garden and declares he will live forever
    I SHALL LIVE FOREVER—AND EVER—AND EVER! (Ch 20, para 1)
  21. Ch 21: reveal. Colin's physical strength is revealed as he stands upright and takes command
  22. Ch 22: quiet. Colin stands laughing as the sun slips over the edge, having accomplished his goal
    It’s planted!” said Colin at last. “And the sun is only slipping over the edge. Help me up, Dickon. I want to be standing when it goes. That’s part of the Magic. (Ch 22, para 64)
  23. Ch 23: reveal. Colin declares his first scientific discovery a success and plans to surprise his father
    I did it! The Magic worked!” he cried. “That is my first scientific discovery. (Ch 23, para 85)
  24. Ch 24: quiet. Dr. Craven decides to let them laugh, accepting their mysterious improvement
    Perhaps they are,” said Dr. Craven. “Let them laugh. (Ch 24, para 81)
  25. Ch 25: reveal. Colin reveals he has drawn back the curtain from his mother's portrait and now looks at her with love
  26. Ch 26: quiet. Susan's final words about Colin's mother being in the garden and his father returning create gentle hope rather than urgency
    Thy own mother’s in this ’ere very garden, I do believe. She couldna’ keep out of it. (Ch 26, para 82)
  27. Ch 27: reveal. The final image of Colin walking across the lawn with his father, strong and healthy, reveals the complete transformation and healing of both child and man

Viewpoint per chapter Both

Viewpoint and narration · lens E2 · compare across books

Counted: the narration is mostly third person (first person words per 1,000 outside speech: 1.1).

The story is told in third person but primarily follows Mary's perspective in early chapters, shifts to include Colin's viewpoint in the middle, and expands to Craven's perspective in the final chapter. This shifting focus mirrors the expansion of the children's world and the garden's influence.

Want and need of the lead AI

Character · lens B3 · compare across books

LeadMary Lennox
WantsMary wants to find and restore the secret locked garden to life.
NeedsMary needs to learn to love and connect with others, moving beyond her selfish and contrary nature.
False beliefMary believes she is unlovable and that isolation is her natural state.
Arcpositive. Mary transforms from a neglected, disagreeable child into a warm, healthy girl capable of deep friendship and love.

Scene log AI

Story and structure · lens A4 · compare across books

One line per chapter: goal, conflict, outcome
ChSummaryGoalConflictOutcome
1Mary Lennox, a neglected and disagreeable child in India, is orphaned by cholera and left alone in a bungalow until discovered by British officers.Mary survives the cholera outbreak and waits for rescueEveryone around her dies or flees; she is forgotten and aloneOfficers find her alive and tell her both parents are dead
2Mary is sent to live with relatives in England, passes through a clergyman's house where she is mocked, and travels by train to meet her uncle Mr. Craven at Misselthwaite Manor.Mary must be transported to her uncle's house in YorkshireShe is disagreeable and unwanted; no one cares for her; she learns her uncle is a hunchback who avoids peopleShe arrives at Misselthwaite Manor and is shown to her room without meeting her uncle
3Mary travels across the Yorkshire moor in a carriage and arrives at Misselthwaite Manor, a vast and gloomy house where she is left alone in her room.Mary must reach Misselthwaite Manor from the train stationThe moor is wild and frightening; the house is enormous and unwelcoming; her uncle refuses to see herMary is shown to her room and left alone without meeting anyone but servants
4Mary meets Martha, a Yorkshire housemaid, who teaches her to dress herself and tells her stories about her family, especially her brother Dickon and the mysterious locked garden.Mary must adjust to life at Misselthwaite and learn English waysMartha speaks Yorkshire dialect Mary doesn't understand; Mary expects servants to obey her completely; Martha treats her as an equalMary begins to learn independence and becomes interested in Martha's stories and the locked garden
5Mary spends days exploring the gardens and following the robin, who leads her to believe the locked garden is nearby; she also hears mysterious crying in the house at night.Mary wants to find the locked garden and understand the crying soundsThe robin leads her near but not into the garden; Martha denies hearing the crying; the house is full of locked doorsMary becomes obsessed with finding the garden and determining who is crying
6On a rainy day, Mary explores the locked rooms of the manor, discovering portraits, furniture, and a mouse family, before being caught by Mrs. Medlock and hearing the mysterious crying again.Mary wants to explore the house and find books or amusementThe house is vast and confusing; Mrs. Medlock forbids wandering; Mary hears crying and is punishedMary is locked in her room but remains determined to find the source of the crying
7After a storm clears, Mary explores the gardens on a beautiful spring day, talks with Ben Weatherstaff about growing things, and discovers an old key buried in the earth near the robin.Mary wants to find the locked garden and understand the spring awakeningBen refuses to discuss the locked garden; the key is hidden; Mary must search for itMary discovers an old key that may unlock the secret garden
8Mary finds a key and becomes determined to locate the hidden garden door, while Martha brings her a skipping rope and news of her family, and Mary begins to change from a contrary child into someone curious and alive.Mary wants to find the locked garden door using the key she discoveredThe ivy-covered wall hides the door; Mary doesn't know where to lookMary finds the door hidden behind ivy when the wind blows it aside and the robin leads her to it
9Mary explores the secret garden, discovers signs of life in the bulbs and roots, begins clearing spaces for them to grow, and learns from Martha about Dickon's skill with plants and animals.Mary wants to understand if the garden is alive and help it growThe garden appears dead with gray branches and no leaves; Mary doesn't know about gardeningMary finds sprouting bulbs, clears spaces around them, and decides to get tools and seeds to help the garden
10Mary meets Dickon in the wood and is enchanted by his ability to charm wild animals; she reveals the secret garden to him and he agrees to help her restore it.Mary wants to find Dickon and show him the secret garden so he can help herMary must decide whether to trust Dickon with her secret; she fears he will tell othersDickon promises to keep the secret and agrees to help restore the garden every day
11Dickon and Mary work together in the secret garden, discovering that many roses are still alive; they clear dead wood and plant seeds, and Mary realizes she now has five people she likes.Dickon and Mary want to restore the garden by removing dead wood and planting seedsMuch of the garden appears dead; they must determine what can be savedThey find living wood in the roses, clear dead branches, and plant flower seeds throughout the garden
12Mary meets her uncle Mr. Craven and persuades him to let her have a garden; he grants her permission to do as she likes, and she receives his blessing to play outdoors freely.Mary wants permission from Mr. Craven to have a garden of her ownMary is nervous about meeting her uncle; he is distant and grieving; she must ask for what she wantsMr. Craven grants Mary complete freedom to play outdoors and have a garden anywhere she wishes
13Mary hears crying in the night and discovers Colin, Mr. Craven's hidden son, who has been kept secret; she tells him about the garden and he becomes obsessed with seeing it, but she convinces him to keep it secret instead.Mary wants to discover who is crying in the house; Colin wants to know about the hidden gardenColin threatens to force people to open the garden; Mary fears the secret will be ruinedMary persuades Colin that keeping the garden secret will be more wonderful; they agree to find it together
14Mary discovers Colin crying at night, visits him, and they become friends while Martha worries about losing her job.Mary wants to find the source of the crying; Colin wants companionship and to keep Mary visiting himMartha fears Mrs. Medlock will punish her for Mary knowing about Colin; Colin's isolation and fear of his own bodyMary and Colin bond; Colin demands she visit daily; Dr. Craven and Mrs. Medlock discover them together but cannot refuse Colin's orders
15The rain stops and spring arrives; Mary visits the secret garden with Dickon and they watch the robin building its nest while planning to bring Colin there.Mary and Dickon want to tend the garden and protect the robin's nesting; they plan to bring Colin to the gardenThey must keep the garden secret and not disturb the robin during its vulnerable nesting timeThe garden transforms with spring growth; they decide to bring Colin when there are more leaves and buds; they learn Colin wants to see Dickon
16Mary neglects Colin to work in the garden with Dickon; they quarrel bitterly, but Mary receives gifts from Mr. Craven and reconsiders her harshness toward Colin.Mary wants to work in the garden; Colin wants Mary's attention and companyMary chooses the garden over Colin; Colin feels abandoned and jealous of Dickon; they fightThey have a terrible row; Mary leaves angry; she receives gifts from Mr. Craven and softens toward Colin; she decides to visit him the next morning
17Colin has a severe hysterical tantrum in the night; Mary shocks him out of it by scolding him fiercely and examining his back, proving there is no lump; they reconcile and Colin agrees to go outside.Mary wants to stop Colin's screaming; Colin wants to be comforted but is trapped in hysteriaColin's terror of his own body and his belief he is dying; the household's fear of his tantrumsMary's harsh words and examination break his hysteria; he learns his back is normal; he agrees to go outside with Mary and Dickon
18Mary tells Dickon about Colin and they plan to bring him to the garden; Mary returns to Colin and reveals the existence of the secret garden door, thrilling him.Mary wants to prepare Dickon and Colin for meeting; she wants to trust Colin with the garden's secretMary's uncertainty about whether Colin can be trusted; the need to keep the garden hiddenDickon agrees to visit Colin; Mary tells Colin about the garden door; Colin is overwhelmed with hope and joy
19Dr. Craven visits Colin and finds him transformed; Colin announces he will go outside with Mary and Dickon; Dickon arrives with his animals and a newborn lamb, delighting Colin.Dr. Craven wants to assess Colin's health; Colin wants to go outside and meet Dickon; Dickon wants to bring joy to ColinDr. Craven's concern about Colin's fragility; the household's amazement at Colin's transformationDr. Craven approves Colin going out with Dickon; Dickon arrives with animals and lamb; Colin is enchanted and asks questions about the garden
20Colin prepares to visit the secret garden for the first time, and after careful planning, Dickon wheels him through the gates where he experiences the spring in full bloom.Colin wants to see the secret garden without anyone knowing about itThey must keep the visit secret and transport Colin without being seenColin is wheeled into the garden and sees it transformed by spring
21Colin experiences the garden's beauty while Mary and Dickon worry about the dead tree, but Ben Weatherstaff discovers them and Colin stands on his feet for the first time in anger and triumph.Colin wants to enjoy the garden in peace and understand its mysteriesBen Weatherstaff appears over the wall and asks dangerous questions about the dead treeColin stands up unaided and commands Ben to keep the secret
22Colin stands and walks in the garden, plants a rose with his own hands, and experiences the joy of physical capability as the sun sets.Colin wants to prove his strength and plant something in the gardenHis thin weak body must be coaxed to obey his willColin walks, digs, and plants a rose while standing as the sun sets
23Colin develops his theory of Magic as a scientific principle and leads a ceremony in the garden where he and the others chant affirmations to strengthen him, then walks around the garden in triumph.Colin wants to understand and harness Magic through scientific experimentHe must convince others to believe in and practice his Magic theoryThe group performs the Magic ceremony and Colin walks around the garden successfully
24Colin and Mary maintain their secret by pretending to be weak while actually growing stronger, eating secretly with help from Mrs. Sowerby, and learning exercises from Dickon that build their muscles.Colin and Mary want to hide their recovery from the household staff and doctorThey must eat enough to grow strong but appear weak and sicklyThey succeed through deception and secret food from Mrs. Sowerby and a hidden oven
25The secret garden blooms fully while the robin broods over eggs, and Colin and Mary explore the unused rooms of the manor on a rainy day, discovering the portrait of Colin's mother.Colin and Mary want to exercise and explore on a rainy day when they cannot visit the gardenThey must find a way to move freely without being watchedThey explore the manor's empty rooms and Colin discovers his mother's portrait
26Colin realises he is well and meets Susan Sowerby, Dickon's mother, who brings warmth and understanding to the garden.Colin wants to understand his transformation and share his joy; Susan wants to affirm his healingColin has never known a mother's love; he fears his father will not accept himSusan validates Colin's health and promises his father will return; Colin feels mothered for the first time
27Archibald Craven experiences a spiritual awakening in Europe and returns home to find Colin transformed and healthy, reuniting father and son in the garden.Archibald must overcome his grief and return home; Colin must reveal his wellness to his fatherArchibald has avoided his son for ten years; he fears what he will find; Colin worries his father will not believe himFather and son meet in the garden; Colin walks out unaided; Archibald is transformed by joy and understanding

Setups and payoffs AI

Story and structure · lens A8 · compare across books

PlantedPays off
Mary's neglected, disagreeable nature and isolation in India (Ch 1)Mary transforms into a warm, healthy girl capable of love and friendship through the garden and her connections to others (Ch 27)
The locked garden described as mysterious and forbidden, locked for ten years (Ch 4)Mary finds the key and discovers the garden, which becomes the healing centre for all three children (Ch 8)
The mysterious crying in the house that Martha denies hearing (Ch 5)The crying is revealed to be Colin, Mary's cousin, who has been kept hidden by his father (Ch 13)
Ben Weatherstaff's knowledge of the garden and his refusal to tell Mary about it (Ch 4)Ben is revealed to have been secretly tending the garden for two years and becomes a guardian of the children's secret (Ch 22)
Mr. Craven's grief over his dead wife and his absence from the manor (Ch 2)Craven experiences a spiritual awakening and returns home to find his son healed and healthy (Ch 27)
Colin's belief that he will die and develop a hunchback like his father (Ch 13)Colin discovers he is healthy and strong, standing and walking in the garden with joy and triumph (Ch 22)
Mary's improved health and appetite from outdoor activity and fresh air (Ch 5)Mary becomes visibly transformed, healthy and beautiful, as others remark on her change (Ch 15)
The robin as a guide and friend to Mary, leading her to the key (Ch 4)The robin builds its nest in the garden, symbolising new life and hope for all the children (Ch 25)
She had a little thin face and a little thin body, thin light hair and a sour expression. (Ch 1, para 2)
Mistress Mary, quite contrary, How does your garden grow? With silver bells, and cockle shells, And marigolds all in a row. (Ch 2, para 8)
The house is six hundred years old and it’s on the edge of the moor, and there’s near a hundred rooms in it, though most of them’s shut up and locked. (Ch 2, para 39)

Speech fingerprints Count

Dialogue and voice · lens C3 · compare across books

CharacterShare of attributed speechLinesWords a lineQuestions per 100 linesExclaims per 100Pet words
Mary Lennox35%43710.322.216.9about, don't, it's, garden, dickon, things
Martha19%12819.414.127.3tha', it's, mother, thee, says, he's
Colin Craven17%18911.314.820.6want, shall, going, dickon, won't, tell
Dickon Sowerby9%7615.713.226.3tha', he's, thee, look, tha'll, says
Mrs. Medlock8%5916.78.516.9she's, there's, it's, young, about, child
Ben Weatherstaff7%7312.69.616.4thee, tha', he's, look, just, rheumatics
Mr. Archibald Craven2%1515.320.013.3want, captain, lennox, child, yourself, take
Mrs. Sowerby2%1119.29.118.2tha', garden, better, i'll, take, milk
Dr. Craven2%248.620.84.2nurse, she's, shall, going, agrees, food

We give a line to a speaker only when one cast name appears in the narration of that paragraph, so many lines stay unattributed. Treat the figures as a sample.

Sentence length per chapter Count

Pace · lens D2 · compare across books

Mean sentence 13.7 words, median 11. 44% of sentences are under 10 words and 7% over 30. In the last fifth of the book, chapters run at 131% and sentences at 111% of the earlier average.

Emotional arc shape Count

Pace · lens D7 · compare across books

0% to 5%: 0.1235% to 10%: 0.11610% to 15%: 0.18615% to 20%: 0.28620% to 25%: 0.28325% to 30%: 0.29730% to 35%: 0.29635% to 40%: 0.21840% to 45%: 0.20245% to 50%: 0.14450% to 55%: 0.12755% to 60%: 0.16760% to 65%: 0.21665% to 70%: 0.24270% to 75%: 0.3375% to 80%: 0.35580% to 85%: 0.3885% to 90%: 0.39890% to 95%: 0.3995% to 100%: 0.394

Computed shape: Rags to riches (rise) (fit 0.68 on a scale of 0 to 1).

We score the mood of each paragraph with a standard word list, then average across 20 equal slices of the book and smooth it. It is a rough reading of word mood, not of plot, and old styles of English can fool it. Shapes follow Reagan and others (2016).

When the lead and the first dialogue arrive Count

Openings and endings · lens F3, F4 · compare across books

First line of dialogue: after 374 words (Ch 1, para 4), 0.5% into the book.

The lead, Mary Lennox, is first named after 5 words (Ch 1, para 2).

Mystery clue list AI

Genre craft · lens G4 · compare across books

ClueKindLaidExplained
The robin comes out of the nest in the locked garden and is friendly to BenclueCh 4Ch 8
Mary hears a child crying in the house at nightclueCh 5Ch 13
The robin leads Mary to a flower-bed where the key is buriedclueCh 7Ch 8
Dickon notices pruning marks on the roses that appear to be from less than ten years agoclueCh 11Ch 22
Colin mentions his doctor is his father's poor cousin who would inherit if Colin diesclueCh 13
Ben mentions the tree's broken branch happened ten years agoclueCh 21Ch 25
Ben reveals he has been secretly tending the garden for two yearsclueCh 22Ch 22
Colin's mother was fond of the garden and loved flowers pointing to the skyclueCh 25Ch 27
It was a curious sound—it seemed almost as if a child were crying somewhere. Sometimes the wind sounded rather like a child crying, but presently Mistress Mary felt quite sure this sound was inside the house, not outside it. (Ch 5, para 37)
It was another cry, but not quite like the one she had heard last night; it was only a short one, a fretful childish whine muffled by passing through walls. (Ch 6, para 34)
Because when you were born the garden door was locked and the key was buried. And it has been locked for ten years. (Ch 13, para 73)

Antagonist AI

Character · lens B7 · compare across books

WhoMr. Archibald Craven
GoalTo escape his grief and avoid the pain of his past by remaining absent from his home and son.
MethodsHe locks away the garden, keeps Colin hidden, and wanders Europe to avoid facing his loss.
Shows their handCh 2
Our noteCraven's grief and avoidance create the conditions for the children's isolation, though he is ultimately redeemed by the garden's transformative power.

Tension curve AI

Pace · lens D6 · compare across books

Ch 1: 4Ch 2: 2Ch 3: 3Ch 4: 2Ch 5: 3Ch 6: 3Ch 7: 2Ch 8: 3Ch 9: 2Ch 10: 3Ch 11: 2Ch 12: 4Ch 13: 5Ch 14: 3Ch 15: 2Ch 16: 4Ch 17: 5Ch 18: 3Ch 19: 2Ch 20: 4Ch 21: 5Ch 22: 3Ch 23: 2Ch 24: 2Ch 25: 1Ch 26: 3Ch 27: 4

Tension score per chapter, 1 to 5 (our AI reading). The narrative moves slowly through Mary's early isolation and discovery, accelerates when Colin is introduced, and builds momentum through the children's garden work and physical transformation. The final chapter provides a satisfying resolution with Craven's return.

Subplot thread map Both

Story and structure · lens A7 · compare across books

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The locked garden mystery and restoration
Mary's character transformation
The mysterious crying and Colin's discovery
Colin's health recovery and transformation
Archibald Craven's absence and redemption
The concept of Magic as a healing force

Motif tracker AI

Theme and motif · lens J3 · compare across books

The carriage lamps shed a yellow light on a rough-looking road which seemed to be cut through bushes and low-growing things which ended in the great expanse of dark apparently spread out before and around them. (Ch 3, para 16)
As she stood on the stone floor she looked a very small, odd little black figure, and she felt as small and lost and odd as she looked. (Ch 3, para 27)
She ran only to make herself warm, and she hated the wind which rushed at her face and roared and held her back as if it were some giant she could not see. (Ch 5, para 2)
The skipping-rope was a wonderful thing. She counted and skipped, and skipped and counted, until her cheeks were quite red (Ch 8, para 42)

Signature words Count

Prose style · lens H3 · compare across books

mary 672 martha 181 garden 229 robin 105 magic 94 colin 303 moor 93 craven 106 yorkshire 52 he's 120 india 50 things 200 queer 57 answered 136 about 366 nurse 61 thee 90 looked 224 tree 65 because 158

Words this book uses far more than the other books on our shelf (log odds, at least 8 uses). Names often top the list.

Commercial facts card Research

Commercial facts · lens L1, L2, L4 · compare across books

First published1911
Author died1924
CopyrightPublic domain in the UK (author died 1924, so life plus 70 years has passed) and in the US (first published 1911, before 1931).
Length81,188 words in 27 chapters; about 5.4 hours to read
GenreFantasy and children's
Sales and adaptationsComing in a later phase, with sources.

Method: counts come from a clean public domain plain text, split into chapters and paragraphs with stable IDs (for example c3p12 is chapter 3, paragraph 12, in reading order). Lenses marked AI are our AI reading of each chapter, made once and stored. Every quote shown was checked word for word against the text; 50 AI quotes for this book failed that check and were dropped.

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