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The Secret Garden: Character

20 lenses on character for The Secret Garden by Frances Hodgson Burnett. Count lenses are exact for our text. AI lenses are our reading and cite only quotes that passed a word for word check.

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B1. Cast list with first appearance and share of mentions. Count

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Lead Mary Lennox; 11 main characters. See the full lens on the book page.

B2. Who is on the page in each chapter (presence heat map)? Count

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Lead Mary Lennox; 11 main characters. See the full lens on the book page.

B3. What does the lead want, and what do they truly need? AI

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Mary wants to find and restore the secret locked garden to life.. See the full lens on the book page.

B4. What false belief does the lead hold, and how is it tested? AI

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Mary's false belief: she is unlovable and isolation is her natural state. This is tested when Martha treats her as an equal (ch 4), when Dickon befriends her (ch 10), when Colin needs her (ch 13 to 14), and when she must show Colin kindness despite his tantrums (ch 17). By ch 27, she has learned to love and be loved.

Chapters: Ch 4, Ch 10, Ch 13, Ch 17, Ch 27

She had a little thin face and a little thin body, thin light hair and a sour expression. (Ch 1, para 2)
Can I trust you? I trusted Dickon because birds trusted him. Can I trust you—for sure—for sure? (Ch 18, para 47)

B5. Arc type: positive, flat or negative? AI

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Positive arc. Mary transforms from a neglected, contrary, sour child into a warm, healthy girl capable of love and friendship. Colin transforms from a sickly, isolated boy who believes he will die into a strong, healthy child who walks and plays. Both characters rise emotionally and physically.

Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 27

She had a little thin face and a little thin body, thin light hair and a sour expression. (Ch 1, para 2)
I’m well—I’m well! (Ch 26, para 18)

B6. Key arc moments with chapter and line. AI

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Ch 1: Mary orphaned, 'there was no one in the bungalow but herself' (q3). Ch 4: Mary becomes curious about the garden, first turning point. Ch 13: Mary discovers Colin, midpoint, 'the garden door was locked and the key was buried' (q24). Ch 17: Colin's hysteria broken, 'there's not a lump as big as a pin' (q34). Ch 27: Mary and Colin transformed, 'I almost feel as if I were alive' (q53).

Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 4, Ch 13, Ch 17, Ch 27

It was true that there was no one in the bungalow but herself and the little rustling snake. (Ch 1, para 31)
Because when you were born the garden door was locked and the key was buried. And it has been locked for ten years. (Ch 13, para 73)
There’s not a lump as big as a pin! If you ever say there is again, I shall laugh! (Ch 17, para 33)

B7. The antagonist: goal, methods, and when they show their hand. AI

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Mr. Archibald Craven. See the full lens on the book page.

B8. How is each main character first shown (first line, first act)? Both

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Mary: 'She had a little thin face and a little thin body' (q1, ch 1). Colin: introduced through mysterious crying (ch 5 to 6), first seen in ch 13. Dickon: mentioned by Martha in ch 4, first appears in ch 10. Mr. Craven: mentioned in ch 2 as absent and grieving, first meets Mary in ch 12. Ben Weatherstaff: appears in ch 4 as gardener, speaks to Mary about growing things.

Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 4, Ch 5, Ch 10, Ch 12, Ch 13

She had a little thin face and a little thin body, thin light hair and a sour expression. (Ch 1, para 2)
It was a curious sound—it seemed almost as if a child were crying somewhere. Sometimes the wind sounded rather like a child crying, but presently Mistress Mary felt quite sure this sound was inside the house, not outside it. (Ch 5, para 37)

B9. Who appears with whom? Network chart of shared scenes. Count

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Pairs who share the most paragraphs. Counted where both names appear in one paragraph.

PairParagraphs together
Dickon Sowerby and Mary Lennox25
Mary Lennox and Mrs. Medlock21
Dickon Sowerby and Mrs. Medlock20
Ben Weatherstaff and Mary Lennox19
Ben Weatherstaff and Dickon Sowerby19
Dickon Sowerby and Martha18
Martha and Mary Lennox18
Martha and Mrs. Medlock16
Colin Craven and Mary Lennox16
Colin Craven and Dickon Sowerby16

B10. Which relationships change most over the book? AI

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Mary and Colin: shift from strangers to devoted friends and co-healers (ch 13 to 27). Mary and Dickon: shift from strangers to trusted allies and garden partners (ch 10 to 27). Mary and her uncle: shift from fearful avoidance to warm connection (ch 2, 12, 27). Colin and his father: shift from ten years of separation and grief to reunion and love (ch 27). These are the four most significant relationship changes.

Chapters: Ch 2, Ch 10, Ch 12, Ch 13, Ch 27

Can I trust you? I trusted Dickon because birds trusted him. Can I trust you—for sure—for sure? (Ch 18, para 47)
In the garden,” it came back like a sound from a golden flute. “In the garden! (Ch 27, para 22)

B11. Foils and mirrors: who reflects the lead? AI

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Colin mirrors Mary: both are isolated, neglected children who transform through the garden and human connection. Dickon mirrors Mary's journey but in reverse: he is already healthy and connected, and teaches Mary how to be. Mr. Craven mirrors Mary's father: both are absent and grieving, but Craven is redeemed while Mary's father is dead. Mrs. Medlock foils Mary: she represents coldness and control, while Mary learns warmth and freedom.

Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 4, Ch 10, Ch 13, Ch 27

She had a little thin face and a little thin body, thin light hair and a sour expression. (Ch 1, para 2)
I’m well—I’m well! (Ch 26, para 18)

B12. Backstory wound: how and when is it revealed? AI

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Mary's wound: orphaned by cholera, left alone and unloved (ch 1, revealed immediately). Colin's wound: his mother died when he was born, his father abandoned him in grief, he was told he would die (ch 14, revealed through Martha's exposition). Mr. Craven's wound: his wife Lilias died ten years ago, he locked the garden and fled to Europe (ch 2, 12, 27).

Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 2, Ch 14, Ch 27

The cholera had broken out in its most fatal form and people were dying like flies. (Ch 1, para 16)
It was true that there was no one in the bungalow but herself and the little rustling snake. (Ch 1, para 31)
Mr. Craven went off his head like when he was born. Th’ doctors thought he’d have to be put in a ’sylum. (Ch 14, para 28)

B13. Agency: how often does the lead act rather than react? AI

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Mary acts frequently: she explores (ch 5 to 6), searches for the garden (ch 7 to 8), enters it (ch 8), works in it (ch 9 to 11), meets her uncle (ch 12), discovers Colin (ch 13), visits him (ch 14), tells him about the garden (ch 18), brings him to it (ch 20). She reacts mainly to Colin's tantrums (ch 16 to 17) and to her uncle's absence. Overall agency is high, approximately 70% action to 30% reaction.

Chapters: Ch 5, Ch 8, Ch 13, Ch 18, Ch 20

if it was the key to the closed garden, and she could find out where the door was, she could perhaps open it and see what was inside (Ch 8, para 2)
There is a door into the garden. I found it. It is under the ivy on the wall. (Ch 18, para 52)

B14. Physical description: how much, when, which traits repeat. Both

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Looks words (eyes, hair, face and so on) in paragraphs that name each character. A rough guide to who gets described most. (rough estimate from word lists)

CharacterLooks words nearby
Mary Lennox159
Ben Weatherstaff51
Martha37
Mrs. Medlock23
Mr. Archibald Craven19
Dr. Craven10
Colin Craven4
Dickon Sowerby0

Mary's physical traits are introduced early and repeated: 'thin face,' 'thin body,' 'sour expression' (q1, ch 1). As she transforms, she gains colour and health: 'cheeks were quite red' (q18, ch 8). Colin is described as pale, thin, and fearful (ch 13 to 16), then gradually as stronger and healthier (ch 22 to 27). Dickon is consistently described as charming animals and having a gift with nature. Physical description is moderate, concentrated in early chapters and transformation moments.

Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 8, Ch 13, Ch 22

She had a little thin face and a little thin body, thin light hair and a sour expression. (Ch 1, para 2)
The skipping-rope was a wonderful thing. She counted and skipped, and skipped and counted, until her cheeks were quite red (Ch 8, para 42)

B15. Names, nicknames and titles, and how their use shifts. Count

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The forms of each name used most, and how often the name comes up in each third of the book.

CharacterMost used formsMentions by third
Mary LennoxMary (609), Mistress Mary (49), Miss Mary (21)276 / 256 / 160
Colin CravenMester Colin (13), Master Colin (12), Colin Craven (1)0 / 2 / 24
Dickon SowerbyOur Dickon (6)5 / 0 / 1
MarthaMartha (193)113 / 74 / 6
Ben WeatherstaffBen Weatherstaff (105), Ben (29), Weatherstaff (8)42 / 11 / 89
Mrs. MedlockMrs. Medlock (128), Medlock (6)59 / 41 / 34
Mr. Archibald CravenMr. Craven (40), Mr. Archibald Craven (7), Mester Craven (7)22 / 19 / 13
Dr. CravenDr. Craven (48)0 / 12 / 36

B16. Mentors and sidekicks: their role and how they exit. AI

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Ben Weatherstaff: mentor who guards the garden and eventually validates Colin's wellness (ch 7, 21 to 22). He exits by accepting the children's secret. Martha: ally and informant who provides exposition and support (ch 4 to 27). She exits by remaining a loyal servant. Dickon: mentor and ally who teaches Mary and Colin about nature and Magic (ch 10 to 27). He remains present throughout. Mrs. Sowerby: mentor who provides food, wisdom, and maternal warmth (ch 24, 26). She validates Colin's healing.

Chapters: Ch 7, Ch 10, Ch 21, Ch 24, Ch 26

An’ that poor lad lyin’ shut up an’ seein’ so little that he gets to thinkin’ o’ things as sets him screamin’. (Ch 18, para 15)
Thy own mother’s in this ’ere very garden, I do believe. She couldna’ keep out of it. (Ch 26, para 82)

B17. Repeated tags, gestures and tics per character. Both

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Gestures that come in the same sentence as each name. (rough estimate from word lists)

CharacterTop gestures
Mary Lennoxlaughed 7, nodded 1, smiled 1
Colin Cravennone
Dickon Sowerbynone
Marthalaughed 4, shook 1, sighed 1
Ben Weatherstafflaughed 1, shook 1
Mrs. Medlocksmiled 1
Mr. Archibald Cravennone
Dr. Cravennone

Mary: 'contrary' (q4, repeated throughout), 'sour' (q1), 'thin' (q1). Colin: 'screaming,' 'hysterical,' 'afraid of his back' (ch 16 to 17). Dickon: speaks Yorkshire dialect, charms animals, says 'tha' and 'thee' (ch 10 onward). Ben Weatherstaff: gruff, protective, speaks Yorkshire. Martha: cheerful, gossipy, speaks Yorkshire dialect. Mr. Craven: absent, grieving, distant (ch 2, 12, 27).

Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 4, Ch 10, Ch 16, Ch 17

Mistress Mary, quite contrary, How does your garden grow? With silver bells, and cockle shells, And marigolds all in a row. (Ch 2, para 8)
He said that if he felt even quite a little lump some day he should know his hunch had begun to grow. (Ch 16, para 65)

B18. Moral choices that define the lead. AI

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Ch 4: Mary chooses to listen to Martha's stories instead of dismissing her, showing openness. Ch 10: Mary chooses to trust Dickon with the garden secret, risking betrayal. Ch 13: Mary chooses to tell Colin about the garden instead of keeping it entirely secret, showing generosity. Ch 17: Mary chooses to shock Colin with harsh truth instead of coddling him, showing tough love. Ch 27: Mary and Colin choose to reveal their wellness to the world, showing courage.

Chapters: Ch 4, Ch 10, Ch 13, Ch 17, Ch 27

Can I trust you? I trusted Dickon because birds trusted him. Can I trust you—for sure—for sure? (Ch 18, para 47)
There is a door into the garden. I found it. It is under the ivy on the wall. (Ch 18, para 52)

B19. Balance of speaking parts by gender. Count

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Of attributed speech, women have 64% and men 36%. (rough estimate from word lists)

GroupWords spoken
Women8189
Men4681
Unclear0

B20. Who changes and who stays fixed? AI

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Mary changes dramatically from contrary to loving. Colin changes from sickly and isolated to healthy and joyful. Dickon remains consistently kind, wise, and connected to nature throughout. Ben Weatherstaff remains gruff but protective. Mr. Craven changes from absent and grieving to present and joyful. Mrs. Medlock remains cold and controlling. Martha remains loyal and gossipy. The garden itself changes from locked and dead to alive and blooming.

Chapters: Ch 1, Ch 10, Ch 27

She had a little thin face and a little thin body, thin light hair and a sour expression. (Ch 1, para 2)
I’m well—I’m well! (Ch 26, para 18)

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