Madame Bovary: Pace
16 lenses on pace for Madame Bovary by Gustave Flaubert. Count lenses are exact for our text. AI lenses are our reading and cite only quotes that passed a word for word check.
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D1. Chapter length in words, as a chart. Count
35 chapters, median 3,246 words. See the full lens on the book page.
D2. Mean sentence length per chapter. Count
Mean 17.4 words. See the full lens on the book page.
D3. Paragraph length per chapter. Count
Paragraphs average 42 words.
Mean paragraph words, chapter by chapter
D4. Scene against summary: how much is shown live? AI
The book is heavily scenic. Most major beats unfold in dialogue and action across chapters 2 to 4, 8, 17 to 18, 22, 24 to 25, 29, 31 to 32, and 35. Summary passages appear in chapters 6, 9, 10, 16, 23, and 26 but remain brief.
Chapters: Ch 2, Ch 4, Ch 8, Ch 17, Ch 22, Ch 24
We were in class when the head-master came in, followed by a “new fellow,” not wearing the school uniform (Ch 1, para 1)
Emma, on entering, felt herself wrapped round by the warm air, a blending of the perfume of flowers and of the fine linen (Ch 8, para 8)
D5. Action against reflection, per chapter. AI
Early chapters (1 to 7) balance action with Emma's internal reflection on her disillusionment. Mid-book (17 to 22) shows action-heavy seduction and betrayal. Late chapters (29 to 32) alternate between Emma's frantic action seeking money and her internal despair before suicide.
Chapters: Ch 5, Ch 7, Ch 14, Ch 19, Ch 29, Ch 31
Before marriage she thought herself in love; but the happiness that should have followed this love not having come, she must, she thought, have been mistaken (Ch 5, para 10)
But she was eaten up with desires, with rage, with hate. (Ch 14, para 63)
D6. Tension score per chapter (1 to 5) as a curve. AI
Peak 5 of 5, mean 3.4. See the full lens on the book page.
D7. Emotional arc of the whole book, matched to the six shapes. Count
Riches to rags (fall). See the full lens on the book page.
D8. Chapter endings: cliffhanger, question, reveal or quiet close. AI
27 of 35 chapters end on a hook. See the full lens on the book page.
D9. Chapter openings: in scene, in summary, or after a time jump. AI
Most chapters open in scene: chapter 2 with Charles arriving at the farm, chapter 8 at the ball, chapter 17 at the agricultural show. Chapter 6 opens in summary (Emma's past). Chapter 10 opens with a town description. Chapter 23 opens after a time jump signalled by 'During Emma's long convalescence.'
Chapters: Ch 2, Ch 6, Ch 8, Ch 10, Ch 17, Ch 23
We were in class when the head-master came in, followed by a “new fellow,” not wearing the school uniform (Ch 1, para 1)
Yonville-l’Abbaye (so called from an old Capuchin abbey of which not even the ruins remain) is a market-town twenty-four miles from Rouen (Ch 10, para 1)
D10. Do chapters and sentences get shorter near the climax? Count
In the last fifth, chapters run at 1.33 times the length of earlier ones, and sentences at 0.77 times. So things speed up near the end.
D11. Dialogue density against pace. Count
Link between dialogue share and chapter length: 0.36 (1 is a perfect match, 0 none). Between dialogue share and tension: 0.4.
Dialogue % per chapter, chapter by chapter
D12. Time jumps and how they are signalled. Both
48 time jump phrases in the narration, such as 'next morning' or 'years later'.
| Where | Phrase |
|---|---|
| c1p48 | next day |
| c1p49 | five years later |
| c2p25 | next day |
| c2p37 | A week after |
| c2p37 | next day |
| c3p24 | next day |
| c3p24 | next year |
| c3p26 | next day |
Time jump phrases, chapter by chapter
Ch 1, para 48: He grew thin, his figure became taller, his face took a saddened look that made it nearly interesting. Naturally, through indifference, he abandoned all the resolutions he had …
Ch 1, para 49: Thanks to these preparatory labours, he failed completely in his examination for an ordinary degree. He was expected home the same night to celebrate his success. He started …
Ch 2, para 25: Instead of returning to the Bertaux in three days as he had promised, he went back the very next day, then regularly twice a week, without counting the …
Ch 2, para 37: But “the blow had struck home.” A week after, as she was hanging up some washing in her yard, she was seized with a spitting of blood, and …
Ch 2, para 37: But “the blow had struck home.” A week after, as she was hanging up some washing in her yard, she was seized with a spitting of blood, and …
Ch 3, para 24: The next day by nine o’clock he was at the farm. Emma blushed as he entered, and she gave a little forced laugh to keep herself in countenance. …
Time jumps are signalled by phrases like 'Six weeks after the show' (chapter 18), 'During Emma's long convalescence' (chapter 23), and 'After Léon's departure' (chapter 16). Chapter 27 jumps forward with 'They were three full, exquisite days.' Most jumps span weeks or months.
Chapters: Ch 16, Ch 18, Ch 23, Ch 27
They were three full, exquisite days--a true honeymoon. (Ch 27, para 1)
D13. Info dump spots: long runs with no action or speech. Both
7 stretches of 900 words or more with no speech at all. These are where description, summary or backstory pile up.
| Starts at | Words | Paragraphs |
|---|---|---|
| c3p22 | 1765 | 17 |
| c1p40 | 1677 | 19 |
| c6p12 | 1546 | 14 |
| c9p25 | 1435 | 17 |
| c5p2 | 1023 | 9 |
| c32p175 | 1003 | 15 |
| c9p6 | 966 | 8 |
Chapter 6 is a long summary of Emma's childhood, reading, and convent education with minimal action. Chapter 10 contains extended description of Yonville town and its inhabitants. Chapter 16 summarises Emma's depression after Léon's departure. These passages lack dialogue and scene.
Chapters: Ch 6, Ch 10, Ch 16
She had read “Paul and Virginia,” and she had dreamed of the little bamboo-house, the nigger Domingo, the dog Fidele (Ch 6, para 1)
Yonville-l’Abbaye (so called from an old Capuchin abbey of which not even the ruins remain) is a market-town twenty-four miles from Rouen (Ch 10, para 1)
D14. Reading time per chapter. Count
About 7.8 hours to read at 250 words a minute. The longest chapter takes 30.9 minutes.
Minutes per chapter, chapter by chapter
D15. Micro tension in quiet scenes. AI
Quiet scenes gain tension through internal conflict and unspoken desire. Chapter 13 shows Emma and Léon's silent attraction through glances and shared reading. Chapter 14 builds tension through Emma's physical illness masking emotional turmoil. Chapter 15 shows Emma's spiritual crisis with the priest, who misunderstands her need.
Chapters: Ch 13, Ch 14, Ch 15
But in the twilight, when, her chin resting on her left hand, she let the embroidery she had begun fall on her knees, she often shuddered at the apparition of this shadow suddenly gliding past. (Ch 13, para 2)
Standing up with his hands on the back of her chair he saw the teeth of her comb that bit into her chignon. (Ch 13, para 13)
D16. Section breaks per chapter. Count
0 section breaks marked in the text, in 0 of 35 chapters.
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